Hey everybody, thought I'd try writing for a change. This is my first story so any constructive criticism would be appreciated.
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On Sunday I captured one of my neighbors and his son. The dad is about 40, a big hairy guy but in good shape. The boy is 18, just graduated from high school. They were tossing a football in the back yard (the boy was the star of his high school team), enjoying the boy's last summer at home before heading off to play football for the state team.
I don't know either of their names; they are irrelevant now.
I shrunk them slowly, so I could enjoy their confusion and then panic as they realized what was going on. They stopped at 1/6th their original height, both just over a foot tall.
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On Sunday I captured one of my neighbors and his son. The dad is about 40, a big hairy guy but in good shape. The boy is 18, just graduated from high school. They were tossing a football in the back yard (the boy was the star of his high school team), enjoying the boy's last summer at home before heading off to play football for the state team.
I don't know either of their names; they are irrelevant now.
I shrunk them slowly, so I could enjoy their confusion and then panic as they realized what was going on. They stopped at 1/6th their original height, both just over a foot tall.