First:
This is my first story, so dont be too rude, if Im not good in style etc, but constructive criticism is always welcome.
Also, I want to point out, that Im german, so my English wont be the best, and if there are grammatically or spelling mistakes, please have tollerance.
And now, lets start with the first chapter:
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There's a difference between normal guys and Jason. I knew this since I first met him. It was in middle school, and from the day he was in our class, everyone admired him. Girls AND boys. Even this lesbian girl and the straight boys. Jason walks down the hallway, and everyone holds his or her breath. Where he walks, everyone walks one step back, so HE has the most space. But, you have to say, Jason was hot as hell. He has short, blonde hair, and green eyes, which makes him look like cat. He has a beautifull smile, and a perfect face. It seems like he didint have any spots on his face during puberty, and no other ugly signs of former injuries or whatever were on his face. He was perfect, simple perfect. And he knew it.
This is my first story, so dont be too rude, if Im not good in style etc, but constructive criticism is always welcome.
Also, I want to point out, that Im german, so my English wont be the best, and if there are grammatically or spelling mistakes, please have tollerance.
And now, lets start with the first chapter:
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There's a difference between normal guys and Jason. I knew this since I first met him. It was in middle school, and from the day he was in our class, everyone admired him. Girls AND boys. Even this lesbian girl and the straight boys. Jason walks down the hallway, and everyone holds his or her breath. Where he walks, everyone walks one step back, so HE has the most space. But, you have to say, Jason was hot as hell. He has short, blonde hair, and green eyes, which makes him look like cat. He has a beautifull smile, and a perfect face. It seems like he didint have any spots on his face during puberty, and no other ugly signs of former injuries or whatever were on his face. He was perfect, simple perfect. And he knew it.